Feb 1, 2013

No Gift

"Hello ma'am. Can I help you with anything?"

"Just looking for a gift for someone I'm exclusively seeing but he wants no committed relationship. Suggestion?"

"No offense, but may I take you out?"




This is my blog due to a challenge on a wonderful blog, Trifecta.


For the weekend prompt we're asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue.

It is February 1st and the month for 'Love Day' as I call it. One of my favorite little holidays. I'll share why before the next 13 days are over! 

22 comments:

  1. Wow! What a suggestion - LOL!

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  2. That's pretty bold! Would love 33 more words to see the answer :)

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  3. oh, my . . . you have room for the rest of the story. :)

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  4. Aha!Clever chap-knows when to try his luck;-)Loved this cute dialogue:-)

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  5. What a lovely gift suggestion (: Give that man a raise!

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    1. lol. Thank you. It was a pretty nice suggestion. :)

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    1. Thanks. You know my favorite saying 'man's biggest mistake is making his lady cry and letting another man make her smile'. :)

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  7. The promise of romance from someone who might actually want a committment - I would say YES!!!

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  8. Wow. And the reply was no! hopefully..

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    1. The answer would have been a 'NO'. After all, she is buying a gift for someone she is exclusive with, regardless of any labels such as 'boyfriend/girlfriend' :)

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  9. How witty! Perfect for Valentines Day.

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  10. Relationships, eh? The gift for writers that just keeps giving and giving. :) You managed to say quite a lot in very few words. Well done. This guy is, obviously someone who thinks quickly on his feet. Whether he is just a smooth operator feeding her a line that he hopes will get him laid or else, he is a sincere guy who sees an opportunity to date a lovely, kudos to him for seizing upon the moment. Kudos to you for capturing the scene so nicely.

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    1. Thank you much. In my mind, which may be jaded toward the opposite sex as far as dating, he was thinking fast on his feet, because what guy doesn't want a girl who's exclusive with them while accepting some 'no commitment' line from them? haha :)

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  11. Saucy! Thanks so much for linking up with us this weekend!

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    1. Thank you! Your challenges are wonderful and inspiring. I have also met a lot of good writers through your page!!

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