Feb 23, 2013

Relief Followed

All he needed was to
lie upon the pine needles
knowing the wild lilies of the valley
were near him, feel the wind pick up
and blow across his sweating brow.
Relief came.


http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/02/trifextra-week-fifty-six.html

7 comments:

  1. sometimes relief comes in blessedly

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  2. i liked reading this... there's a very relaxing tone to it :)

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  3. This is so lovely! Sometimes the simplest pleasures are the best (:

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  4. I have days like that too. Very nicely done!

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  5. Sweet images in a lovely poem.

    [where'd you find all those words, tho?]

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    1. I added a few. Such as 'his sweating brow'.

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