Mar 30, 2013

Falling in Love

She was nervous and fidgety
making her seem like a twelve year old about to see her crush.
He noticed too, pointing out
she was shaking like a leaf.
She'd fallen in love. 

@ donetta sifford 3-30-2013




This weekend we're asking for exactly 33 words including an idiom somewhere within.  Examples of idioms include - add fuel to the fire or wear your heart on your sleeve.



12 comments:

  1. This is sweet and the idioms work perfectly. Nice job!

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  2. either that, or she needs some sugar. :) nicely done.

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    1. lol. Come to think of it, that was probably it. :) Thank you.

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  3. This is such a sensitive piece.

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  4. Ha! I'm laughing at Barbara's comment. Taking the sweet the extra step. This is great. Thanks for linking up!

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  5. Very lovely. And I love Barbara's comment as well.

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  6. Awww so sweet and cute! First love... *sigh*

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  7. Such a lovely piece of writing! Brings back memories... :)

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  8. Nice! (My shaking like a leaf was accompanied by the urge to lose my lunch, but I'll forget that part, okay? :))

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    1. Thanks. I have dreadful insomnia so sometimes I greatly appreciate if some parts are forgotten in my writing. :)

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  9. Aww,this is so sweet,loved it:-)

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