May 5, 2013

Rising From Ashes






seen tragedy, just a child
professor x promised help
           emotionally, physically, 
           xaveir bound jean grey
men wanting control

beautiful, psychic
telepathic, telekinetic
unstoppable force
jean and i emerged
we are power
THE PHOENIX 

@ donetta sifford 5-5-2013   written for:   http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/05/trifextra-week-sixty-six.html






This weekend we're having some fun with the prompt, some super-powered fun, that is. We're asking you to write the origin story to the superhero of your choice in exactly 33 words.










12 comments:

  1. The Phoenix sounds like a force to be reckoned with. Love the pics, too!

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  2. Well, I want to know whether the Phoenix went out and kicked Professor x's ass. Very well done and cool poem.

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  3. Interesting one specially cos its a "she":-)Cool pic & a lovely poem

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  4. I think I have heard of the Phoenix rising. Good creation.

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  5. she actually just about ended up taking everyone out, didn't she? (This was Jean Grey, right?)

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    1. she did. yes this is Jean Grey. though i believe of the latest, she took out Xaiver but that was the Dark Phoenix. she rose again i hear and is now head master over the school. i heard she may make an appearance on the new Wolverine movie they are making. hope so.

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  6. Well, Done!
    She kicked butt!
    Scott
    mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/05/04/trifecta-writing-challenge-132013/

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  7. Love this Donetta! Phoenix is one of my favourite superheroes. Love the way you changed the voice at the end.

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  8. I'd love to know more about this one! Thanks for linking up. Hope to see you back next week.

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  9. Pictures go well twit the theme.Nice...

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  10. Great one.. the Phoenix sounds good.

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