Jun 7, 2013

The Ending



"If I leave now, I won't ever come back to you!"
She tried letting his words sink in, thoughts racing.
Her voice was calm as she said, "I don't love you anymore."

@ donetta sifford 6-7-2013


On to the prompt.  This weekend we're revisiting an early Trifextra, our second ever.  The challenge is to write a complete story in only three sentences.  Good luck!


http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/06/trifextra-week-seventy-one.html





7 comments:

  1. Powerful and concise. Fantastic.

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  2. And sometimes it's just that hard, and just that easy. This WAS a complete story.

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  3. Good for her - I didn't like his threats.

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  4. Great response and a great story.

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  5. Honesty is always the best way to go!

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