Aug 16, 2013

Changes

One year in one image


Cold, winter days,
sunlight sparkles
across pure snow.
Breezy, spring mornings,
light awakens all, 
announcing longer days
of summer drawing close. 
As the evening air becomes
chilly, autumn displays
grand, warm colors. Changes. 

@ donetta sifford 8-16-2013 

Written for: Trifecta






17 comments:

  1. You have wonderfully distilled each season down to it's essence-like the grand warm colors of autumn! I love this piece so very much!! Excellent 33 words, Donetta!

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    1. Thank you so much. I am fortunate enough to live in an area where each season is pretty mild. Not too hot, not too cold, perfect in spring and autumn. :) Gorgeous in the fall, with the colors changing in the mountains. Wonderful scenery.

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  2. Each season has something beautiful for us. To me, autumn is particularly refreshing after a hot summer. Then again, the new life of spring is exciting after winter :)

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    1. You sound like me. It's almost as if autumn and spring come around to balance out winter and spring. :)

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  3. I agree with Valerie. You've written a synopsis of the beauty each season brings us and, if we're lucky, it repeats. Nicely realized, Donetta :))

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    1. Thank you very much. You are right, if we're lucky, it repeats. I enjoy each season in some way.

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  4. "sparkles across pure snow"
    "autumn displays grand, warm colors"

    I feel as if I just took a fabulous tour through the seasons. I especially felt these lines. This is wonderfully written and just beautiful. :)

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    1. Thank you. I like that; a fabulous tour through the seasons. :)

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  5. I like this progression of the seasons. Great job!

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  6. That last word is a perfect summary of your lovely piece. Thank you for linking up. Please remember to come back and vote!

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    1. Thank you!! I remembered to vote at the last minute. Got my 3 in there though. :)

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  7. To summarize the beauty of each season in just 33 words is so great.

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    1. Thank you. Yours was very powerful, with beautiful lines.

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  8. You've captured the essence of the prompt perfectly.

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