Sep 28, 2013

Hell Is Murky





Temptation, fall, reckoning.
Sister witches or the Fates?
Lady Macbeth, the downfall.
Three hags dangling bait.
"Fair is foul and foul is fair."
Banquo's death song plays
from the boiling pot of brew.


@ donetta sifford 9-28-2013
Written for Trifecta






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    1. Thank you. Macbeth is my favorite Shakespeare.

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  2. Donetta, I admire the way you weave your words in everything you write. Lovely!

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    1. Thank you so much, Jo-Anne!! I really enjoyed Macbeth more than any other Shakespeare.:)

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  3. I love your take on the prompt and love the way presented a favorite of mine.

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    1. Thank you. It's one of my favorites also! :)

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  4. Beautifully done. Big thumbs up. :)

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  5. Well done. You could "ghost-write" a sequel.

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    1. Thank you. I have had this blog since late December of 2012 and I still don't completely understand the 'ghost writing' concept. I've read about it. I understand what it is, but not so much how to go about doing it. lol. :)

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  6. This is very good.. a classic feel and wonderful compact form.. I like it.

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    1. Thank you very much!! I love classic touches to modern writing, so you have given me an awesome compliment. :)

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    2. Thank you. I wanted a trio that was unique. With Halloween sneaking up, the witches chant came to mind; "Double, Double. Toil and Trouble".

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  8. Thanks for joining us this weekend. Be sure to come back and vote!

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    1. Thanks for stopping by and I just finished voting. :)

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  9. Beautiful! And such a full story in 33 words. Great job!

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    1. Thank you! Your piece was very unique and awesome!

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